Dear Ms. Salaksak,
Thank you for posting your request on History Hub!
In addition to the War Diary that you quoted, descriptions of the sinking of the I-28 can be located on images 24, 25, 30, and 31 of the U.S. Submarine War Patrol Reports of the USS Tautog, December 1941 - June 1942 that we linked in our previous reply. Of these records, images 30 through 31 provide the most details about what the crew of the USS Tautog determined the condition of the I-28 was after their third torpedo struck it.
We hope this information is helpful.