French Page

I need help with this page in French. I transcribed it fully but I am sure it has errors. My French is okay but nowhere near fluent. Any help would be appreciated.

Thanks,

Henry

crowd.loc.gov/.../

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  • Thanks for working on the page. Normally I use the tags to correct the writer when they misspell a person's name or to give an explanation. For example in a different campaign they mentioned a Pension Commissioner named Tanner. I made a tag stating his name was James Tanner. You probably overdid it with the tags but that is okay. More is better than not enough and LOC can remove them if they want. 

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